[Eol Hedryon]

Астра, мне как любителю как их некоторые называют, давящих, стихов, очень понравилось. Молодец... Искренно надеюсь, чо писалось оно не в момент душевной драмы...

Маргульф, да, ритм гуляет чуток))

от себя: давно не писал по-английски, назвал новую концепцию Black Fern (черный папоротник)

- The Rain Song. -

Rain is falling through my dreams...
Nothing matters... Never since
I was there in front of you
Missing nightmares coming true...

Passing by and going there...
No more fear, no things to swear...
Beeng scared of all these nights,
When you're playing with my mind...

All you need is one more day...
Summer ends... you ran away...
No more words, no time to speak...
You're so high and I'm so weak...

Day before the summer dies
Gives us chance to hide the lies...
Even now... Untill I leave...
Still much things for you to give...

Falling down the deepest Hell...
Still have words I'll never spell...
And untill last leaf will fly
I will love you till I'll die...