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Старый 30.05.2006, 08:49
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Банально, угумс, но сие мои первые опыты, оч. трудно рифмы подбирать, вот и получается только из тех слов, что я знаю. Но в принципе, в песнях зачастую чуть корявые рифмы не режут слух так, как в стихах.
Счас выложу песню про демонов.

Devils May Cry

People call them cruel devils
It is true in somewhat
People say they are evil
But this is false thought

They live in fires’ ashes
Untold endless ages
For enemies bloodshed
For righteous vengeance

People hate them with blind rage
But no one reminds
Devils are fallen angels
And devils may cry

They fly
They rise
They banished from paradise
Dark will
To kill
No one could escape deadly steel
But you
May try
For until devils may cry
Until devils may cry

Don’t put all the blame just on devils
They are unguilty in mess
Don’t ask for your blame hell or heaven
They are not playing in chess

They fly
They rise
They banished from paradise
Dark will
To kill
No one could escape deadly steel
But you
May try
For until devils may cry
Until devils may cry

Mankind will be paid for all sins
When time is coming for infernal rise
Falling of Eden brings chance to win
For damned forces…
But devils may cry

They fly
They rise
They banished from paradise
Dark will
To kill
No one could escape deadly steel
But you
May try
For until devils may cry
Until devils may cry
29.05.2006